There was actually so much that never made it onto the page of that one XD I actually have several, private entries full of cut dialogue or narrative from the story that I made, but forced myself to leave out. Such as:
"I didn't want to be drunk in pubLIC. I wanted to be drunk in a bar. They threw my ass into pubLIC... arrest them!" - Rejected for a blatant Ron White rip-off
Hopefully it was a drink, because John's Czech was pretty much nonexistent, and the last thing he needed was his coworkers offering to buy him hookers. - rejected because I think I was the only one who would find it amusing that John's immediate thought is that Zelenka would buy him a hooker rather than anything else.
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There was actually so much that never made it onto the page of that one XD I actually have several, private entries full of cut dialogue or narrative from the story that I made, but forced myself to leave out. Such as:
"I didn't want to be drunk in pubLIC. I wanted to be drunk in a bar. They threw my ass into pubLIC... arrest them!" - Rejected for a blatant Ron White rip-off
Hopefully it was a drink, because John's Czech was pretty much nonexistent, and the last thing he needed was his coworkers offering to buy him hookers. - rejected because I think I was the only one who would find it amusing that John's immediate thought is that Zelenka would buy him a hooker rather than anything else.