ext_3523 ([identity profile] space1traveler.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] greyias 2008-10-07 03:48 am (UTC)

This reads like a Robert Ludlum novel, the movement in the scenes smooth as glass. The writing tight and the voices dead on. The repartee between John and Rodney coming quickly like the staccato gunfire from a P90. Excitement!
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