ext_24344 ([identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] greyias 2007-12-08 02:21 am (UTC)

Wow.

What a wonderful, thoughtful look of John's relationships between all of his friends and team mates. You blended some really great analysis of the use of names, something that's subtle but a real glimpse of a person's viewpoint.

I often wondered many times about who calls him John and who doesn't and I had the same thought about Sheppard's dead friend and Ronon's first name.

This was lovely, all wrapped up in witty banter, capturing John and Rodney's voice perfectly and topped off as a nice coda of the stress Sheppard felt assuming command after Elizabeth left.

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